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December 6, 2009


Sun Man Ho

long time reader, first time poster. This is a wonderful translation!

Ton Aner

The line before the last one is misconstrued; it should read:
To sing in truth [i.e. to truly sing] is another [kind of] breath [i.e. the true breath - certainly not "just a breath"!].
Other than that, it's a very good translation indeed. And the whole Poetry section is wonderful. Cheers.

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